Gah! stupid art class, its got me in the Criticing mood (did i spell that right? ><
Well anyhow. i love the position, and the tones you have going on. The one thing that makes it feel imbalanced to me are the teeth. You only have them in that one section. I would say without it would look great, or maybe just the canines. I dont want your art to be messed up by adding teeth. But..it is just me.